this will be the final update to this blog, the screenplay has been improved by replacing one or two scenes as well as re-writing certain scenes.

for my research on this screenplay i visited the life of lincoln muesuem which houses one of the few world war 1 tank itself which was one leading inspiration for the screenplay. i also read the "the landships of lincoln", second edition, by richard pullen. another source of inspiration was the movie fury which helped me create the battle scene at the end.

04/12/16
it has been a while since i last updated this blog, due to work time along with out off university work as well as personal issues wich thankfully have been resolved. after recievieng feed back on my first draft i have decided to re arrange two scenes from the screenplay that involve conflict between the characters. on top of this i will be making adjustments to lines of dialouge and also re- write the first scene. i aim to have the second draft re-written within the next few days and will post the results on this blog afterwards.