04/12/16
it has been a while since i last updated this blog, due to work time along with out off university work as well as personal issues wich thankfully have been resolved. after recievieng feed back on my first draft i have decided to re arrange two scenes from the screenplay that involve conflict between the characters. on top of this i will be making adjustments to lines of dialouge and also re- write the first scene. i aim to have the second draft re-written within the next few days and will post the results on this blog afterwards.